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Logo Design I Did - BMP


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#1 SteveOrM3L

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Posted 07 December 2007 - 11:58 PM

These are just two design i did for a company Call "Blue Mountain Products".
His goal was to have a mountain, combined with a nice text, kind of free styled.

This was the 1st Design i did...
i wasnt happy so i did another set.

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^ 1st Design ^

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^ Colored for website logo ^

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^ Black n White For Print or t-shirt etc. ^

Let me know what u think.
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#2 Chung Dha

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 01:06 AM

1rst design is too big and more of an illustration.

2nd and 3rd are bit too much of a cliche on mountain logo's. If you searched google you will see allot of mountain logo inside a circle or a oval. And there are just too much companies that are called mountain something.

You need to search futher and more out of the box. You need to make something that resembles a mountain and not look like the real thing.

And typography you should stick with the font of the first design, its much cleaner and professional.

#3 SteveOrM3L

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 05:42 AM

1rst design is too big and more of an illustration.

2nd and 3rd are bit too much of a cliche on mountain logo's. If you searched google you will see allot of mountain logo inside a circle or a oval. And there are just too much companies that are called mountain something.

You need to search futher and more out of the box. You need to make something that resembles a mountain and not look like the real thing.

And typography you should stick with the font of the first design, its much cleaner and professional.



If it had been my choice i would have, thats what he wanted...
idk why i tried to explain to him that to many ppl have that ideal logo. so idk w.e i guess...
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#4 entz

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 03:12 PM

All 3 doesn't do it for me. I think you need to make the logos bolders. Rights now they look like a bit unfinish. But if i had to choose, i'll go for the 2nd design but with another font. A bold and heavy font maybe?.. you should continue to play with the graphic of the mountain, stylize it even more maybe.

#5 SteveOrM3L

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 04:41 PM

I would have done it like this, if it was my choice.

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He didnt want that....
But that was a revised edit i did for myself...
and for him as a choice
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#6 Chung Dha

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 06:19 PM

As a designer you can be tougher against your client your the one that know what is the best. The rest is then to get small detail to catch the client to want it too.

If I was you , you should be bold and make a new things ad show him. I think best to try to do BMP big with the M shaped as a stylized mountain.

If you search rocky mountain is one and all the same logo with a oval/ circle.

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I think you need to do more with the logo cause the circle looks so plain and thin and maybe play more with the tekst positioning.

#7 SteveOrM3L

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Posted 09 December 2007 - 05:14 AM

Thank you for your input.
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#8 arcticsnpr

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Posted 09 December 2007 - 05:45 PM

I agree with the boldness. It really needs to pop out. Also, I think you could simplify the mountain a bit. That is just my ideas. good job :)

#9 squarelogo

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Posted 13 December 2007 - 06:35 PM

I agree with other comments. Bolder text with smaller and simpler icon.




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