Artist: Nick Mealey
Website http://portfolio.arc....us/nickmealey/
The Giver Of Life
Artist: Nick MealeyWebsite http://portfolio.arc....us/nickmealey/
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arcticsnpr
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punkerella
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Posted 24 December 2007 - 01:13 AM
Artist: Nick Mealey
Website http://portfolio.arc....us/nickmealey/
looks pretty spiffy, nice colors!... just one thing throws me off. the penguins mid air to the far right.
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bigyou
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Posted 13 January 2008 - 11:45 PM
Very nice one. Great colors. Nice stuff.
2 things I think would need to be adressed on this piece:
1_ I think this illustration needs a focal point. A place where the eye will be taken first. Because as it is right now, I'm trying to look everywhere at the same time...
2_ Why is the type at the top placed at the edge of the illustration ? The way it is positoinned right now seems to be an error. I think you should give a try at giving this type more room.
Hope this helps !
2 things I think would need to be adressed on this piece:
1_ I think this illustration needs a focal point. A place where the eye will be taken first. Because as it is right now, I'm trying to look everywhere at the same time...
2_ Why is the type at the top placed at the edge of the illustration ? The way it is positoinned right now seems to be an error. I think you should give a try at giving this type more room.
Hope this helps !
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Deathdart
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Posted 16 January 2008 - 07:30 AM
I like your illustration, but I'd like to make one comment about your website: The navigation looks like it will smoothly fade into the next item when I click an arrow and I was disappointed to see this not happening. Maybe you could implement a flash version of your portfolio?
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Sevenlee
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Posted 25 January 2008 - 04:40 AM
looks lovely. Very whimsical in nature. It could use a more defined focal point like mentioned above. I almost want to see the branches take a backseat by being lightened a bit and the text "giver of life" take a more darker approach to become a focal point.
Cool stuff though! What was your inspiration for the penguins and the juxtaposition of them?
Cool stuff though! What was your inspiration for the penguins and the juxtaposition of them?
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