Hi, I was wondering if I could get anyones thoughts on this design that I created: http://www.createmx.com/images/id.gif
It will be used for a special computer program for primary schools.
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Hi, I was wondering if I could get anyones thoughts on this design that I created: http://www.createmx.com/images/id.gifIt...
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Posted 28 October 2006 - 12:52 AM
It's cute. It gave me a feeling of exhuberance. If it's for primary school, I would create another version with bright colors as already suggested, but keep that one, too, and perhaps a black one (if needed). Very nice job.
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Posted 28 October 2006 - 11:41 AM
I agree. Cerulean or emerald green would fit more nicely since it was intended for children. These would be my preferences, but it definetly needs to be of a brighter color.
Other than that it looks very lively, it is elegantly simple in design and hits the target group. Great work, I really like it..
Other than that it looks very lively, it is elegantly simple in design and hits the target group. Great work, I really like it..
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Posted 28 October 2006 - 11:56 PM
Thank-you for your feedback. I will definitely use your suggestions and produce a few color variations.
Thanks again,
Thanks again,
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Posted 23 November 2006 - 06:26 PM
First of all I think the logo is well done. Appropriate font and engery was created. It sends a clear message.
most of my suggestions have already been mentioned. However, you could play with not only one solid color, but in this case using a palette of colors (like the primary colors) for different letters or even just for the "kid" might give it that element it's missing. My though its coming from the concept of a pack of crayons. Since it's for kids, mixing colors might help you to achieve the desired result.
Can't wait to see an updated version!
Adam
most of my suggestions have already been mentioned. However, you could play with not only one solid color, but in this case using a palette of colors (like the primary colors) for different letters or even just for the "kid" might give it that element it's missing. My though its coming from the concept of a pack of crayons. Since it's for kids, mixing colors might help you to achieve the desired result.
Can't wait to see an updated version!
Adam
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Posted 28 November 2006 - 11:20 PM
i love the design. i agree on the color change, but you might be able to get away with leaving the character as is, and changing the font to something that contrasts it more. i love the look of it though.
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Posted 29 November 2006 - 02:17 AM
simple and to the point.. i like it, it speaks what it's purpose is.. maybe a little more vibrant colors i agree
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Posted 21 December 2006 - 10:18 AM
I found your new logo to be executed well for the intended applications, you may want to simply colorize the icon with the child and play between the remaining letters and the icon as two different color combinations.
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Posted 21 December 2006 - 03:34 PM
I think the logo is a good design idea, however I think I would work the child a bit more. As mentioned above the fingers get lost when minimmized, but maybe you could even make it more like a child drawing. Usually when doing a shillouette you want greater detail, but with this idea i would say maybe even go a bit less...more simplistic. Just a thought..thanks!
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