My web portfolio

www.geocities.com/wltr_gnzlz

This is my web portfolio. Its not comepletely done yet. Tell me what you think. I'd apreciate any feedback or advice you could give me.

You've got a great start there for sure! Some suggestions, if i may, I think the layout itself needs to look more uniform. There's something missing in terms of a central focal point.. it feels a bit scattered as you click about the site.

I love the blues and blacks. Very sophisiticated color choice.

Hello. I like your art. Your 3D art is really cool too.

But I think the problem may be that your art is hiding under your website. I think you should bring your art out more- bigger thumbnails, or have them contrast with the black background more by having a white thumbnail background on all of them. I personally don't like black backgrounds. It looks unprofessional to me. Unless the text and graphics really contrast well with black.

I also think you should get your own domain name, because geocities is so 1998, and it also looks really professional.

I like the idea/layout of your navigation menu, but I honestly don't like the way it blends into the background. Maybe the blue menu should be brighter/lighter so it can really contrast well.

I hope this helps you, take it or leave it because its all just my opinion. But like a_mahstudios said, you do have a good start! Good luck with it. And welcome to DC!

Good start. To get more business and present yourself as more professional, I would move away from geocities, and purchase a domain name. GL

Nice work. As it was said before, try to change your host.

you should optmize some of your images to have a better view on the browser. some of them don´t fit in the screen

If you want to be taken seriously, you've got to get off geocities and to and actual domain of your own