I am looking for feedback on this brief flash project I made for a class assignment. It is supposed to introduce myself as a designer and artist and show my personality and skills.
intro animation
introduction animation
I am looking for feedback on this brief flash project I made for a class assignment. It is supposed to...
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browncat
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gopher's
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 06:18 PM
Hi browncat. I like some of your logos but I think you should make the flash movie faster, because I sea it frame by frame. You can fix that by making the FPS("frame per second" in flash) greater than 30. You can try and you will see how diferent it will look 
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browncat
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 09:43 PM
Is it just the animated (tweened) parts that are too slow? I have to use 12fps but I can reduce the number of frames.
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 10:44 PM
Hi browncat , it looks good!. I agree with gopher's about taking the FPS to 30, but if you have to use 12 as a requirement, you can do what you said and reduce the number of frames. Also, you can make the animation more dynamic with some simple touches, like the ones in this banner .
Instead of using 2 keyframes in the movement, try using 3. Also, you can play with the texts and distort them a bit by making them continue the movement in the direction they are going. Hope this helps .
Take care
Bella
, it looks good!. I agree with gopher's about taking the FPS to 30, but if you have to use 12 as a requirement, you can do what you said and reduce the number of frames. Also, you can make the animation more dynamic with some simple touches, like the ones in this banner .Instead of using 2 keyframes in the movement, try using 3. Also, you can play with the texts and distort them a bit by making them continue the movement in the direction they are going. Hope this helps
.Take care
Bella
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browncat
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Posted 25 October 2005 - 04:59 AM
Thanks for the suggestions. I added some motion and removed 50 frames in various places.
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Posted 27 October 2005 - 01:24 PM
Even though it moves too slow, you didn't leave some of the text on the screen long enough for me to read it all. Especially if you have a picture in there. There was one part that had inspiration and a picture of a dinosour, I couldn't read everything on the page. It looks good though.
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