I have made a logo
want some creative crits to improve
http://www.splashgra.../Untitled-1.jpg
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I have made a logowant some creative crits to improvehttp://www.splashgra.../Untitled-1.jpg
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g0ld3n_tig3r
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psygn
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 05:58 AM
Looks good. 
If I were to revise it, I would:
- Shrink the doghouse and ground shapes
- Pick another color for the apostrophe as it blends in with the white from a distance
- Minimize the spacing in "Premium Dog Kennels" and perhaps change the color so not to distract the "Dog's Den" name.
If I were to revise it, I would:
- Shrink the doghouse and ground shapes
- Pick another color for the apostrophe as it blends in with the white from a distance
- Minimize the spacing in "Premium Dog Kennels" and perhaps change the color so not to distract the "Dog's Den" name.
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 06:04 AM
Thanks for your review
http://www.splashgraphics.in/doggy.jpg
these are the basic prototypes i made
looking forward for more CCs
:)
http://www.splashgraphics.in/doggy.jpg
these are the basic prototypes i made
looking forward for more CCs
:)
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g0ld3n_tig3r
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 07:19 AM
Thanks psygn
I chose the top right one after most people voted it.
I chose the top right one after most people voted it.
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 07:56 AM
I like the two in the top, and the one at the top left the most. The open space in the base of the door (opposite to the closed space in the other logo) gives me a feeling that the door is open and is saying "come and enter, you are welcome"
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g0ld3n_tig3r
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 01:21 PM
thanks for the review codebirth
someone said the orange was too juicy for a kennel
so i made a new version with brown colors
http://www.splashgra...s den brown.jpg
someone said the orange was too juicy for a kennel
so i made a new version with brown colors
http://www.splashgra...s den brown.jpg
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 09:38 PM
Hey, g0ld3n_tig3r. I like the logo with the orange better, actually... but I agree with a psygn that the green blends into the white. A slightly darker color would be better.
Also, try making "Dogs Den" bigger, and "Premium Dog Kennels" smaller. The house overwhelms the space... if the title were bigger I think that would help.
Good concept, though... like the swoop of grass. Adds a nice whimsical touch to the logo.
Also, try making "Dogs Den" bigger, and "Premium Dog Kennels" smaller. The house overwhelms the space... if the title were bigger I think that would help.
Good concept, though... like the swoop of grass. Adds a nice whimsical touch to the logo.
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g0ld3n_tig3r
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Posted 17 May 2008 - 03:14 AM
thanks again for your reviews
i will work on the logo to make it better
:)
i will work on the logo to make it better
:)
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Posted 17 May 2008 - 06:33 PM
i liked your one on the bottom right most. Its basic enough and the black box around the text i like too.
Your current logo, I like the dog house and the land, but the land for me, seems like it takes away from the dog house, i would make it smaller width wide.... to make it look like the doghouse is on a little hill maybe? idk, just a thought
hehe
Your current logo, I like the dog house and the land, but the land for me, seems like it takes away from the dog house, i would make it smaller width wide.... to make it look like the doghouse is on a little hill maybe? idk, just a thought
hehe
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Posted 17 May 2008 - 07:12 PM
Hey, g0ld3n_tig3r. I like the logo with the orange better, actually... but I agree with a psygn that the green blends into the white. A slightly darker color would be better.
Also, try making "Dogs Den" bigger, and "Premium Dog Kennels" smaller. The house overwhelms the space... if the title were bigger I think that would help.
Good concept, though... like the swoop of grass. Adds a nice whimsical touch to the logo.
I thought that also, maybe having the tagline the same width as the title.
But still very a very nice piece.
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Posted 18 May 2008 - 02:06 AM
All four designs are nice. However, I think the first one is the keeper. It is simple and I'm sure would look perfect on any marketing material that you print.
I have made a logo
want some creative crits to improve
http://www.splashgra.../Untitled-1.jpg
"There are no walls imagination can't climb. Only the walls we create limit our imagination" Mohip
Mohip Creations
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Mohip Creations
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markre
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Posted 23 May 2008 - 01:37 PM
black and white ones look better:)
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JasonLarche_Com
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Posted 09 June 2008 - 06:25 PM
I might be solo on this, but using such a contrasting color in the type (the bright green apostrophe on white between the brown or orange type) can make elements lost. At first glance there looked to be a wide space between the G S in Dog's before my eyes adjusted . If it doesn't serve a purpose then i wouldn't change the color. The color combos are nice, just not in the type.
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