few of my past creations

sorry the quality of these arent very high. it's all i have on file right now but they are 100% mine. Feel free to criticize or compliment.

my t-shirt i designed for my varsity baseball team



just a few projects i did on my free time

Few builds...

Shirt design - Good play of the typefaces and colors. but always remember that the design should not cross up to the waist down. Always consider that some people do wear shirts tucked-in.

"Miami Hurricanes" - I think the text is too big and the white glow doesn't compliment white colored text. The background color is too loud for me, you can desaturate it or make it monochromatic (Team color?) And uhm, is there a letter U hiding in the background?

Space - I like the contrast of the clouds. Are there any stars around?

Keep it up!

Cheers!

Few builds...

Shirt design - Good play of the typefaces and colors. but always remember that the design should not cross up to the waist down. Always consider that some people do wear shirts tucked-in.

"Miami Hurricanes" - I think the text is too big and the white glow doesn't compliment white colored text. The background color is too loud for me, you can desaturate it or make it monochromatic (Team color?) And uhm, is there a letter U hiding in the background?

Space - I like the contrast of the clouds. Are there any stars around?

Keep it up!

Cheers!

thanks for the feedback. haha yeah i know some people tuck their shirts in but if somebody on my baseball team tucks that shirt in they don't deserve to have one haha.

The background on the Miami Hurricanes design is too busy. Maybe you could have kept out the galaxy thing.

Also, it's best use that in a design one should use as few fonts as possible. I know, they are display fonts, but still, you'll be surprised how professional your designs will look when you use just a few fonts.

Hope this helps.