www.geocities.com/wltr_gnzlz
This is my web portfolio. Its not comepletely done yet. Tell me what you think. I'd apreciate any feedback or advice you could give me.
My web portfolio
www.geocities.com/wltr_gnzlzThis is my web portfolio. Its not comepletely done yet. Tell me what you...
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#2
Posted 08 May 2006 - 02:01 AM
You've got a great start there for sure! Some suggestions, if i may, I think the layout itself needs to look more uniform. There's something missing in terms of a central focal point.. it feels a bit scattered as you click about the site.
I love the blues and blacks. Very sophisiticated color choice.
I love the blues and blacks. Very sophisiticated color choice.
#3
Posted 08 May 2006 - 09:43 PM
Hello. I like your art. Your 3D art is really cool too.
But I think the problem may be that your art is hiding under your website. I think you should bring your art out more- bigger thumbnails, or have them contrast with the black background more by having a white thumbnail background on all of them. I personally don't like black backgrounds. It looks unprofessional to me. Unless the text and graphics really contrast well with black.
I also think you should get your own domain name, because geocities is so 1998, and it also looks really professional.
I like the idea/layout of your navigation menu, but I honestly don't like the way it blends into the background. Maybe the blue menu should be brighter/lighter so it can really contrast well.
I hope this helps you, take it or leave it because its all just my opinion. But like a_mahstudios said, you do have a good start! Good luck with it. And welcome to DC!
But I think the problem may be that your art is hiding under your website. I think you should bring your art out more- bigger thumbnails, or have them contrast with the black background more by having a white thumbnail background on all of them. I personally don't like black backgrounds. It looks unprofessional to me. Unless the text and graphics really contrast well with black.
I also think you should get your own domain name, because geocities is so 1998, and it also looks really professional.
I like the idea/layout of your navigation menu, but I honestly don't like the way it blends into the background. Maybe the blue menu should be brighter/lighter so it can really contrast well.
I hope this helps you, take it or leave it because its all just my opinion. But like a_mahstudios said, you do have a good start! Good luck with it. And welcome to DC!
#7
Posted 27 July 2006 - 03:17 AM
If you want to be taken seriously, you've got to get off geocities and to and actual domain of your own
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