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#2
Posted 04 May 2010 - 06:52 AM
brightening it up would be a good idea.
#3
Posted 04 May 2010 - 12:30 PM
Look at your shadows... The real shadows of your hand come below, but the shadows you have on the art come above. I would also try to match the blur and color of the real shadows.
I would work on making the hands shaded in proportion to the head. It looks as though the head was taken seriously and the hands were made too quickly.
As stated, very cool idea though!
#5
Posted 04 May 2010 - 01:21 PM
I also think the shadows on the figure are fine. To me it looks like He's peeling up from the top of his head and you definitely want the shadows underneath the hand. The only shadow I would consider changing is the drop on the word bubble. If you move it below it, it will make the bubble appear to be floating because it is bleeding off the page and overlapping the background.
I also wouldn't worry too much about where the arm is coming from. His chin is obviously very prominent, and positioned more in the foreground. His arm should be thin towards the face and larger as it comes forward in space- as you have it.
Again, great job for your first composition in Photoshop!
#6
Posted 04 May 2010 - 05:25 PM
looks really great , but wots with his hand coming out of his chin !
brightening it up would be a good idea.
Good idea! I did so much color correcting that after awhile i guess i didnt even notice the darkness of it.
As far as the arm goes , it is a cartoon and the hands and head are exaggerated which causes the neck and shoulder to be behind the chin
#7
Posted 04 May 2010 - 05:28 PM
Very cool idea, a couple of things to help...
Look at your shadows... The real shadows of your hand come below, but the shadows you have on the art come above. I would also try to match the blur and color of the real shadows.
I would work on making the hands shaded in proportion to the head. It looks as though the head was taken seriously and the hands were made too quickly.
As stated, very cool idea though!
yea i agree but we had to have a scanned image in the piece (which are the hands), and after trying to match the color of the white in the hands to the white in the paper on the photo i lost alot of the defining shadows
#8
Posted 04 May 2010 - 05:30 PM
I think it looks great! Very cool idea!
I also think the shadows on the figure are fine. To me it looks like He's peeling up from the top of his head and you definitely want the shadows underneath the hand. The only shadow I would consider changing is the drop on the word bubble. If you move it below it, it will make the bubble appear to be floating because it is bleeding off the page and overlapping the background.
I also wouldn't worry too much about where the arm is coming from. His chin is obviously very prominent, and positioned more in the foreground. His arm should be thin towards the face and larger as it comes forward in space- as you have it.
Again, great job for your first composition in Photoshop!
i Agree! i really didnt even want the word bubble in there but we had to have a graphic element added in
#9
Posted 04 May 2010 - 06:01 PM
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#10
Posted 28 May 2010 - 04:40 AM
you might need to color correct the hands to make the transition a little smoother to the eye. If you bring down the blue in the paper with curves in photoshop it should get you close.
I really like the drawing, the mouth detail is great
#11
Posted 28 May 2010 - 06:51 AM
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