yeah that was a tough problem... according to the design brief we were not supposed to represent any specific culture in our logo (which I interprited as creating an abstract refrence to all cultures. i.e. the colors representing a multitude of cultures) but yes I see your point... I suppose I could of done paint brushes and insturments .. but the festival involves so much more than just the visual arts... it was just tough to design lol. any suggestions about how i could have done it?
I think this needs to be more playful. The typography needs some work, though I understand what you are trying to do I still think you should have each of the letters work off of one another. Notice if you look where the first letter of each meet you will see they are not lined off of one another therefore you have no cohesiveness.
Look at the image attached below
Also play with your fonts, use different weights and sizes to get your message across. You said this is a logo, make it look like a logo It almost is layed out like a poster at the moment.
As for how to show cultural diversity...what do you think of when you think of that? Do some research. Ask yourself "what is cultural diversity" Maybe in each box a different flag of a different nation? but not the entire flag...just pieces of it or specific Symbols from it.
There...I think i am done now lol
Edited by .:FMD, 02 June 2009 - 10:18 PM.