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#2
Posted 16 May 2008 - 05:58 AM
If I were to revise it, I would:
- Shrink the doghouse and ground shapes
- Pick another color for the apostrophe as it blends in with the white from a distance
- Minimize the spacing in "Premium Dog Kennels" and perhaps change the color so not to distract the "Dog's Den" name.
#3
Posted 16 May 2008 - 06:04 AM
http://www.splashgraphics.in/doggy.jpg
these are the basic prototypes i made
looking forward for more CCs
:)
#5
Posted 16 May 2008 - 07:19 AM
I chose the top right one after most people voted it.
#7
Posted 16 May 2008 - 01:21 PM
someone said the orange was too juicy for a kennel
so i made a new version with brown colors
http://www.splashgra...s den brown.jpg
#9
Posted 16 May 2008 - 09:38 PM
Also, try making "Dogs Den" bigger, and "Premium Dog Kennels" smaller. The house overwhelms the space... if the title were bigger I think that would help.
Good concept, though... like the swoop of grass. Adds a nice whimsical touch to the logo.
#11
Posted 17 May 2008 - 03:14 AM
i will work on the logo to make it better
:)
#12
Posted 17 May 2008 - 06:33 PM
Your current logo, I like the dog house and the land, but the land for me, seems like it takes away from the dog house, i would make it smaller width wide.... to make it look like the doghouse is on a little hill maybe? idk, just a thought
hehe
~W. Harrison Engle
#13
Posted 17 May 2008 - 07:12 PM
Hey, g0ld3n_tig3r. I like the logo with the orange better, actually... but I agree with a psygn that the green blends into the white. A slightly darker color would be better.
Also, try making "Dogs Den" bigger, and "Premium Dog Kennels" smaller. The house overwhelms the space... if the title were bigger I think that would help.
Good concept, though... like the swoop of grass. Adds a nice whimsical touch to the logo.
I thought that also, maybe having the tagline the same width as the title.
But still very a very nice piece.
#14
Posted 18 May 2008 - 02:06 AM
I have made a logo
want some creative crits to improve
http://www.splashgra.../Untitled-1.jpg
Mohip Creations
http://www.mohip.com
#16
Posted 23 May 2008 - 01:37 PM
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