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#3
Winter artwork
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Senior Member
Posted 28 March 2008 - 03:09 PM
beautiful piece
maybe I'm just blind but I'd like to see it bigger to make out the details
PS - is the "JA" your personal logo? it's too large
maybe I'm just blind but I'd like to see it bigger to make out the details
PS - is the "JA" your personal logo? it's too large
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#6
shajib_gm
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Posted 04 April 2008 - 07:39 PM
sparks on the clouds are disturbing and your logo is too big to put here. this are the negative parts.
i like the warmth tone and vintage look of the photos used. good work. keep designing.
i like the warmth tone and vintage look of the photos used. good work. keep designing.
Visit my temporary portfolio:
http://shajib.carbonmade.com
http://shajib.carbonmade.com
#7
baiskee
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Elite Designer
Posted 04 April 2008 - 09:01 PM
yeah, your signature is kinda shouting. 
The roots are a bit detailed and you tend to loose your focus on the girl.
I like the vintage look though.
Well Done.
The roots are a bit detailed and you tend to loose your focus on the girl.
I like the vintage look though.
Well Done.
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#9
Janana128
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Apprentice Designer
Posted 16 April 2008 - 05:48 AM
It's very good!!!
It's hard to not focus on your signature.
I would also like to see it bigger to see the detail.
It's hard to not focus on your signature.
I would also like to see it bigger to see the detail.
Check out my portfolio! Let me know what you think!
http://janaportfolio.blogspot.com
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