Another Logo; please Comment
This is one of my latest works. this logo is for a Women wellfare NGO. they are trying to give Computer...
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shajib_gm
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Posted 12 March 2008 - 04:02 PM
This is one of my latest works. this logo is for a Women wellfare NGO. they are trying to give Computer education to helpless women. i tried to portray freedom of their soul through this logo. tell me how is it?
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spraguedesigns
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 08:01 PM
This is one of my latest works. this logo is for a Women wellfare NGO. they are trying to give Computer education to helpless women. i tried to portray freedom of their soul through this logo. tell me how is it?
It looks washed out to me.. is it just the image quality?
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Chung Dha
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 09:36 PM
How the rainbow stop at the figure looks odd you need to change that part to stop diggerent there. They need to be same distance each from the figure and try to make the like stop less straight, more with an edge that follows the shape of the figure.
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Emir
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Posted 18 March 2008 - 12:02 AM
Chung Dha is right. The ending of that rainbow should be smooth, not cut off like that. You can try to blend it with the figure maybe. And try to make the whole image more of a 'whole' image. It looks like few different, irrelevant logos are brought together in order to make one logo. At least, that is what I see...
Try to make a better connection between the rainbow and the figure. Also make the rainbows arches equally thick and symmetrical. Also, pay attention to the beginning of that rainbow, where it isn'T placed symmetrical with the 'w', which gives an uncomplete look to me.
And a littlecontrast in colors wouldn't hurt either.. (Man I totally crashed and bashed you logo, sorry
)
Try to make a better connection between the rainbow and the figure. Also make the rainbows arches equally thick and symmetrical. Also, pay attention to the beginning of that rainbow, where it isn'T placed symmetrical with the 'w', which gives an uncomplete look to me.
And a littlecontrast in colors wouldn't hurt either.. (Man I totally crashed and bashed you logo, sorry
)
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TommyGun96
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Posted 18 March 2008 - 03:51 PM
What I see here ... looks rather like an femenine product´s logo.
Maybe the color scheme or the "free" concept shown by the rainbow and a jumping person ... I think its getting off the topic you are on... try to adjust it.
Good luck!
Maybe the color scheme or the "free" concept shown by the rainbow and a jumping person ... I think its getting off the topic you are on... try to adjust it.
Good luck!
"It´s better to die for something ... than to live for nothing!" 
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shajib_gm
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Posted 18 March 2008 - 05:14 PM
this logo is for a feminine product as this NGO works only with females. i had to choose this color scheme on request of my client. he wanted me to portray freedom of female soul in this logo.
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http://shajib.carbonmade.com
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shajib_gm
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Posted 18 March 2008 - 05:19 PM
Chung Dha is right. The ending of that rainbow should be smooth, not cut off like that. You can try to blend it with the figure maybe. And try to make the whole image more of a 'whole' image. It looks like few different, irrelevant logos are brought together in order to make one logo. At least, that is what I see...
Try to make a better connection between the rainbow and the figure. Also make the rainbows arches equally thick and symmetrical. Also, pay attention to the beginning of that rainbow, where it isn'T placed symmetrical with the 'w', which gives an uncomplete look to me.
And a littlecontrast in colors wouldn't hurt either.. (Man I totally crashed and bashed you logo, sorry )
it's ok man. i am here to share my work and i am learn from you guy's. thank's for giving me your opinion.
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http://shajib.carbonmade.com
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Heidi Dali
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Posted 09 April 2008 - 02:56 PM
I agree that the ending of the rainbow should follow the figure.
The figure could have more feminim shape to it. I also think that there is to much emty space between the rainbow and the text.
Maybe you could lower the rainbow and let it end where the text ends. Let the figure be where it is, only with a withe border or space between figure and rainbow.
just a suggestion.
The figure could have more feminim shape to it. I also think that there is to much emty space between the rainbow and the text.
Maybe you could lower the rainbow and let it end where the text ends. Let the figure be where it is, only with a withe border or space between figure and rainbow.
just a suggestion.
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