I was wondering if I could get your suggestions on my logo below.
Which one do you like the best? Is there anything I can change?
Thanks,
Need Your Opinion - Logo
Hello,I was wondering if I could get your suggestions on my logo below.Which one do you like the best?...
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Sour
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Posted 08 January 2007 - 06:23 AM
Hello,
I was wondering if I could get your suggestions on my logo below.
Which one do you like the best? Is there anything I can change?
Thanks,
I was wondering if I could get your suggestions on my logo below.
Which one do you like the best? Is there anything I can change?
Thanks,
www.sour.co.nz
Logo Design
Logo Design
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_Redrum
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Posted 08 January 2007 - 06:59 AM
Hi Creatable, I have a few suggestions:
First, I think the logo could use a bit more color. With a name like "creatable" I just don't see it having only one.
Also, the font you've used has very uniform line structure. Again, given the name, I would probably opt for something with a bit of character; however, I don't mean "whacky", in case that's what it sounds like.
Lastly, in terms of the hand, I have two suggestions actually. 1) The fingers look slightly thicker than they should naturally be. I would consider shaving just a bit off of the sides. 2) I would probably keep the top version if you're going to use any green color. The bottom looks a bit like an unpleasant gooey substance. Alternatively, making the bottom hand more streamlined rather than bumpy may also help in that respect.
Hope you post a few updates
First, I think the logo could use a bit more color. With a name like "creatable" I just don't see it having only one.
Also, the font you've used has very uniform line structure. Again, given the name, I would probably opt for something with a bit of character; however, I don't mean "whacky", in case that's what it sounds like.
Lastly, in terms of the hand, I have two suggestions actually. 1) The fingers look slightly thicker than they should naturally be. I would consider shaving just a bit off of the sides. 2) I would probably keep the top version if you're going to use any green color. The bottom looks a bit like an unpleasant gooey substance. Alternatively, making the bottom hand more streamlined rather than bumpy may also help in that respect.
Hope you post a few updates
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ulahts
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Posted 08 January 2007 - 01:49 PM
Hi Creatable,
First, as i see your intention was to put emphasis on a hand print over the name. Then...make the hand look like a real handprint. Easy to do.
The name sugests me creativity, then....color should be implied here.
The hand as a symbol is pretty overused.
In the logo the r is smaller than the rest of the letters.
You can use a more creative font, rather than Avantgarde or Futura.(think on AGGIE URW, AGFA ROTTIS, Fake Plastic,almighty
Microgramma, Monotype Art Gallery, Zoetrope BRK are just a few 
Take a look on the last two fonts mentioned...you'll see what i ment.
Hopefully it will help.
Bests,
Emi
First, as i see your intention was to put emphasis on a hand print over the name. Then...make the hand look like a real handprint. Easy to do.
The name sugests me creativity, then....color should be implied here.
The hand as a symbol is pretty overused.
In the logo the r is smaller than the rest of the letters.
You can use a more creative font, rather than Avantgarde or Futura.(think on AGGIE URW, AGFA ROTTIS, Fake Plastic,almighty
Microgramma, Monotype Art Gallery, Zoetrope BRK are just a few Take a look on the last two fonts mentioned...you'll see what i ment. Hopefully it will help.
Bests,
Emi
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Sour
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Posted 16 January 2007 - 01:02 AM
Thank-you for your feedback. I think it might be time replace the hand.
I have put together a new idea and I was wondering if you think I should follow through with this idea or stay with the hand and try and develop that?
I have put together a new idea and I was wondering if you think I should follow through with this idea or stay with the hand and try and develop that?
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#5
ulahts
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Posted 16 January 2007 - 08:48 AM
Now...i might think that your first one was better.
Why don't you try something more creative with that swirl. Think on
the word table: dinner table, graffic table...whatever table resemples...
swirltable...a perspective swirl...a swirled paintbrush.
I don't get that can here.
Why don't you try something more creative with that swirl. Think on
the word table: dinner table, graffic table...whatever table resemples...
swirltable...a perspective swirl...a swirled paintbrush.
I don't get that can here.
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Posted 16 January 2007 - 10:51 PM
If you have to choose between the 2 i would have to say to stick with the first one. The second looks to generic, no real feeling to it. True the hand is kinda overused but like the name says, be ceative with it. try stuff...
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_Redrum
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Posted 17 January 2007 - 01:00 AM
I'm not sure that I agree with the table idea. That might confuse people since the actual word "creatable" has nothing to do with tables.
Personally, at this point, I would opt for either a variation of the first symbol or a new one altogether.
Personally, at this point, I would opt for either a variation of the first symbol or a new one altogether.
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vincea
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Posted 17 January 2007 - 01:58 AM
to be honest i love the paint bucket logo with the colour over the first logo you showed with the hand. Maybe fiddle around and use a paint brush instead of a bucket.. but i like it alot.
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Sour
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Posted 17 January 2007 - 02:23 AM
Thanks again for your help. I will take your feedback and see what I can can come up with.
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Posted 18 January 2007 - 02:52 AM
(Sorry about my english) I like alot the second one, how about if the paintbucket "paints" the word creat instead of the 3 letters rea, think it would be better when reading and would be less confusing. Think it could be more interesting to if you use both, the hand and paintbucket, that my opinion.
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mockc
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Posted 28 January 2007 - 05:12 AM
I really like the paint pucket one and prefer it over the first "hand" one as well. I'm thinkin that if you want it to look like it's painting some of the letters maybe have it painting half of all the letters instead of just an arbitrary number of them. This would keep viewers from thinking the three letters of a different color hold some sort of significance.
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raghav
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Posted 28 January 2007 - 02:02 PM
Hi creatable,
I like your both ideas, to be much more precise your bucket idea is somewhat lagging as compare to your hand idea, What i want to suggest is try to play a bit with the fonts and try to tweak in the letters to give it a more meaning of "creatable", let the creativity be in the tweaking of alphabets aswell try it out.
regards
I like your both ideas, to be much more precise your bucket idea is somewhat lagging as compare to your hand idea, What i want to suggest is try to play a bit with the fonts and try to tweak in the letters to give it a more meaning of "creatable", let the creativity be in the tweaking of alphabets aswell
try it out.regards
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discipline
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Posted 10 February 2007 - 05:26 PM
hi creatable,
i prefer first idea , top picture, with ragged edges.. (cool logo btw)
maybe u should use another color and make fingers more detailed inside. but not too much..
second picture, with bucket seems to me a little boring. definitely u need to vitalize it with other colors
i prefer first idea , top picture, with ragged edges.. (cool logo btw)
maybe u should use another color and make fingers more detailed inside. but not too much..
second picture, with bucket seems to me a little boring. definitely u need to vitalize it with other colors
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