I posted a layout I was making for a football(soccer)club, but I wasn't quite satisfied with it.
So I redid it.
http://img465.images...tpreview5fn.png
I went for a compact and tidy look.
Blue is the clubcolour, and green seemed obvious to me.. Football, grass.. You know
I would really appreciate feedback on this, as I think it's done, but ofcourse, things can always me improved.
Made in Illustrator.
FcdeRakt Layout - Redone
I posted a layout I was making for a football(soccer)club, but I wasn't quite satisfied with it.So...
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Posted 08 May 2006 - 02:05 AM
Ooo! Very nice! I personally LOVE illustrator. The detail in the soccerball image is fantastic. If there was one thing I would change, and it's not even imporant, would be how big area for the menu is. I find you've already got so many big chunks of space reserved for the other images/negative space, It would help to draw some attention to the text by allowing for it to take some of the green grass area. Just a thought anyway. As I said, it's not even important, but I wanted to have some sort of constructive critisism for you.
Wonderful work!
Wonderful work!
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