Hello all,
Here is a logo I am designing for a health and beauty spa. Any comments are most welcome.
Much appreciated.
Adam
Logo - Please critique :)
Hello all,
Here is a logo I am designing for a health and beauty spa. Any comments are most welcome.
Much appreciated.
Adam
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i_travin
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Posted 29 March 2006 - 04:39 PM
looks good...but i didn't like the greyish tinge beneath the leaf, jus my personal feelin..i mean didn't like tht for some strange reason, giv a try without the shadow or mayb a bit a derker but smaller shadow in terms of spread.
but otherwise it seems good, the green colour brings a certain freshness...
but otherwise it seems good, the green colour brings a certain freshness...
#6
apresico
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Posted 30 March 2006 - 01:33 AM
the leaf is done nicely. And I think I agree with i_travin. maybe if the color was lighter? and the text health and Beauty Spa are not legible. Same goes for the of on the leaf but if it was just a little darker, I think it would be cool. Nice design overall! its lovely! I do really like the "Garden" and "Eden" font.
#7
adambender
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Posted 30 March 2006 - 01:39 PM
the leaf is done nicely. And I think I agree with i_travin. maybe if the color was lighter? and the text health and Beauty Spa are not legible. Same goes for the of on the leaf but if it was just a little darker, I think it would be cool. Nice design overall! its lovely! I do really like the "Garden" and "Eden" font.
You're right. Here's the updated version. Much less "muddy" and I think the text is easier to read. Thank you all for your constructive comments.
Adam
#9
a_mahstudios
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Posted 31 March 2006 - 02:10 PM
I really like the progress so far, but I think you should try playing around with the leaf placement. Use the same text, maybe shift around the "heath and beauty spa" a bit. For a bit of option anyway. I've only seen the latest version so I'm not sure if you've already tried that already. I like the bright color of the leaf, it stands out well and looks like it would work in a black and white version as well.
Nice work.
Nice work.
#10
adambender
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Posted 31 March 2006 - 03:04 PM
I really like the progress so far, but I think you should try playing around with the leaf placement. Use the same text, maybe shift around the "heath and beauty spa" a bit. For a bit of option anyway. I've only seen the latest version so I'm not sure if you've already tried that already. I like the bright color of the leaf, it stands out well and looks like it would work in a black and white version as well.
Nice work.
I agree. I've been trying to figure out how to better incorporate the text. I think I need to leave it for a but and come back to it with a fresh head. Your comments have been very helpful.
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