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#1 jonboy

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Posted 13 March 2006 - 12:26 PM

Comments, tips, anything is appreciated.


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Posted 13 March 2006 - 04:19 PM

great character! however I think the pants don't fit the whole 2d style...

#3 jonboy

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Posted 14 March 2006 - 01:18 AM

Thanks.
Yeah, I am experimenting with the clothing side of things... textures and such.

#4 _Redrum

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Posted 14 March 2006 - 04:21 AM

Also, if we're talking anatomical tips, I would consider making the neck a bit thicker and the shoulders slant down a bit as they go out. Otherwise it looks pretty neat, you should make a few of those :)

#5 jonboy

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Posted 14 March 2006 - 05:29 AM

Hi Redrum.
Yeah, I noticed his square shoulders :p

thanks for your comments :)

#6 Al3x

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Posted 14 March 2006 - 03:53 PM

looks like someone from a boyband. It is very nice, the texture on the pnats is excellent but the whole character seems a bit squashed.

#7 jonboy

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Posted 15 March 2006 - 01:31 AM

squashed in what way? too stumpy?

#8 jonboy

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Posted 15 March 2006 - 09:06 AM

here's one i just whipped up.
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i think i like the first one better.

#9 Sylense

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Posted 15 March 2006 - 01:17 PM

i like the shading of the face on this second one... not too shabby there.
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#10 jonboy

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Posted 15 March 2006 - 01:52 PM

Thanks Sylense :)
I really like some of the work you have been doing. Your speed freak design is nice.

#11 vektorthunder

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 06:05 AM

agree with sylense ... the skin tone make him more real but still in cartoonish way
but for the shoes, the first guy is better
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#12 jonboy

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 06:58 AM

Hi Vektorthunder.
Yeah - the shoes on the second guy suck.. that was the last thing i did. rushed it a bit :p

#13 jonboy

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 07:03 AM

here is another one i made.
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#14 colordesign

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 04:01 PM

Great work there.I like the last one the most.
The two guys are ok too but you should consider making them 2D from beggining to end:)
Keep up the good work!

#15 jonboy

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Posted 17 March 2006 - 02:27 AM

I wasn't going for a 3D effect, I just put shadows and highlights on the clothes... hmm.

#16 a_mahstudios

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Posted 24 March 2006 - 05:21 AM

Nice character designs. The moose is my favorite. But I think that's cos there's moose here in NFLD. :p

#17 retlaw

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Posted 24 March 2006 - 04:45 PM

Good characters. For the first one: I think it has good potential. I think that the shading on the pants ruin the 2D look, I also think the neck should be thicker. The second character has, well... more character. There is actually some noticiable emotion and depth in the face and eyes... hard to do. I think the moose is great although I think you need to spice up the body more... you are certaintly capable of that... great creativity!




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