Tanya WIP

Working on this fanart for a friend of mines contest, Tell me what you think.





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great 3D feel!

I am sorry I can't tell what's exactly wrong with it, but the open skin areas do not appeal to me. However I'll be looking forward to seeing your progress!

it would probably be easier to judge this if we knew how the character is supposed to be portrayed. right now i'm thinking she ought to be more feminine, but i could be wrong if that's not her personality. let me know and i'd love to give more feedback.

Great coloring, looks good on the color. However on the skin areas...I'd push the black a little more instead of that broken up penciled grey look u got on the lines. makes it look more complete Perhaps thats what resurepus was sensing?

Good job, can't wait too see it finished.

From an anatomy point of view, there is a major problem at her mid section. She is too skinny, and her hips aret too small (not that of a veluptuous woman but almost of a lanky teenager) sry if that's a little harsh wording

Anyways, I would widen her hips first of all. Secondly, I think the reason that her "skin areas" are off is because you've shaded them as if they were geometric studied. Try to loosen up the curvature a little more, make more shading in some areas ad less in others. Also, I would strongly suggest overlapping the left breast over the right. Right now they're kindof uneven.

As some last details, she seems to be missing a buttox and a left knee cap.

With those things attended to it will be a really nice colored piece. Good luck with it, and keep us posted!

Yeah some teaking here and there would get you a more solid piece. Please show once it's finished.

I agree that her anatomy is incorrect. However that's a given. I don't feel it to be much problem since it is a fictional drawing. Heck if Aeon Flux was a real person, I think I'd laugh at her.