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I need an opinion on my work

Hey there, I've ust finished a business card and i'm really curious about your opinion on it....

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#1 kocdesign

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Posted 22 October 2012 - 08:43 PM

Hey there,
I've ust finished a business card and i'm really curious about your opinion on it. So please leave me a comment, any kind of critique really appreciated!

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Thank you!

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#2 CervAnaM

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Posted 13 December 2012 - 04:44 PM

I like the white card more than the black one, unless the black card is to be the design on the front. Then, it works. However, I believe that the repeated logo on your contact information is too much for my taste.

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#3 kocdesign

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Posted 13 December 2012 - 07:47 PM

Thank you! IT's a two sided card, so the two design is one card

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#4 ambush

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 05:06 PM

The overall business card is nicely done. Very clean and nice usage of type. The logo seems to be a little repetitive. It's on the front, back and as a watermark. Maybe the back is a pattern made of just squares. This will touch on an aspect of the logo without overusing it. A tagline could also be on the back if 3BC has one. Hope this helps.

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#5 kocdesign

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 07:06 PM

Thank you very much! Next time i'll try not to overuse the logo

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#6 sc06tty

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 02:47 AM

I think both look gr8 prefer the white one better though:)

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#7 ItsMoh

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 10:10 AM

Nice and clean. I actually don't mind the use of the Logo's, especially on the back. It will stand out well.

Good job.

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#8 BenONE37

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Posted 12 July 2013 - 05:04 AM

Agree, probably don't need the watermark on the white side.

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#9 Derrington

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Posted 26 September 2013 - 01:05 PM

I'm not sure if the phrase "3bc interiors & furniture" on the right edge of the black side is needed. It's already in the logotype. It would be cleaner without it - this white text on the black background brakes the balance for me. But I love the white side and it's simplicity! Maybe you can change the watermark - instead of repeated logo use just some squares? Or leave it clean?

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#10 stikyo

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Posted 26 September 2013 - 01:54 PM

I like it very much! Minimal and focuses on vital info about the business!

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#11 Routh

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Posted 26 September 2013 - 02:27 PM

beauty with simplicity......love it

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#12 Sevenlee

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Posted 26 September 2013 - 03:20 PM

I like these!! Have you considered any treatments?

I would have to agree with Derrington, it's a bit redundant but I know you wanted to tie the front with the back using a bit of white. Why not take an element like the square on the corner (or the one in the logo) and turn it white? At lteast that way it will tie to the other. Best wishes, nice work, God bless!