VoIP Brochure Blue Shades
#1
Posted 06 January 2010 - 11:22 PM
Any Feedback or comments are appreciate it =)
Regards,
#2
Posted 08 January 2010 - 10:51 AM
As a whole the brochure is "overcrowded". It doesn't have any "white space" in order to "breathe" and to be easy read and understood by the people. You have too many objects, different alignments and no particular accent. You've also mixed.. lets say several styles. You have some things designed with "shiny" style, like the bottom of the background, the bullet points, and then you have thongs like the "Volume Discounts.." and the elements of the bottom of the flyer.
So as a whole - give it some white space, realign the elements (you can make a grind and align by it) and keep it in one style.
I hope I've been helpful.
#3
Posted 17 January 2010 - 02:04 PM
Thanks again for your professional review
-Amr
#4
Posted 17 January 2010 - 08:05 PM
At a glance, I think the information is well organized and readable. That is key—this is a marketing tool. If I were looking for that product/service, this brochure would catch my attention.
BTW, I'm not crazy about the colors but that could just be my monitor. I would brighten it up a bit.
#5
Posted 17 January 2010 - 08:33 PM
-Amr
#6
Posted 18 January 2010 - 04:30 AM
Nice work!
#7
Posted 18 January 2010 - 03:18 PM
If you could make the top portion match the bottom 2/3rds I think it would be great! But, you know the bottom line is whether the customer is happy, if they are, then you've done your job!
thanks for posting!
#8
Posted 06 February 2010 - 09:37 AM
However I agree with the footer part THE paragraph below the 2 boxes need be shown better also the Credit Plans need to be more clear and organized.
Thanks for your feedback appreciate it xD
-Amr
#10
Posted 19 February 2010 - 01:08 PM
I am new to this forum so can you explain about the designing process>
Thanks in advance.........
Hello John
You're confusing me lol, Do you mean 'New on Design Firm?" or You don't know what to do in here? Because you asked to Learn about the Design Process And this Thread is about Showing Finished work case, So I was expected from you to give me a feedback however My suggestion for you is to check out Inspiring Designs Category Tho- it will be useful for you.
I'm Not sure if i replied your question as you mentioned. If you need to ask about how i did the design Just let me know. I don't want to be off thread.
Regards,
-Amr
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Posted 18 September 2012 - 01:00 PM
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