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hi I am a graphics and multimedia person from Lahore. I have made my first portfolio website and I'd...
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#3
Posted 15 July 2005 - 12:39 AM
Your illustrations are very well made. You've created your own style with it. I like the playing of text and randomizing of it. question, you used tables? im not a web developer or coder so i was curious cuz it seems like tables.
Ok the only thing i find dristacting of your site really is in the menu. Where it says "online" up on top? IT's cut off in my browser. Everything else seems so smooth and transitional, its like when i see the "online" it diverts my attention.
But that's it really. great design. Wish you best of luck =)
ps: if it's too late to do anythign about it, might i suggest a light gradient to fade it some to black so that the line doesnt cut off so sudden. Just a thought. :-)
Ok the only thing i find dristacting of your site really is in the menu. Where it says "online" up on top? IT's cut off in my browser. Everything else seems so smooth and transitional, its like when i see the "online" it diverts my attention.
But that's it really. great design. Wish you best of luck =)
ps: if it's too late to do anythign about it, might i suggest a light gradient to fade it some to black so that the line doesnt cut off so sudden. Just a thought. :-)
#4
Posted 16 July 2005 - 07:41 AM
thanks a lot scfsu and sevenlee....
* yes I have used tables , I am also not a good site developer, it took me some time to do it right.
* about the cutting online ... ah well its a long story actually i started my design by giving a n effect of an old cut & burned paper but i ended up with this.....and I'll take it into consideration thans for pointing out
* yes I have used tables , I am also not a good site developer, it took me some time to do it right.
* about the cutting online ... ah well its a long story actually i started my design by giving a n effect of an old cut & burned paper but i ended up with this.....and I'll take it into consideration thans for pointing out
#6
Posted 18 July 2005 - 11:39 AM
Really nice...I like your style UKp .....Just not a big fan of the white clouds effect you used in the bottom of the design..
Btw, i'm from Pakistan too
Jazzz
Btw, i'm from Pakistan too
Jazzz
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